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This year I am participating in Loren (I Saw Lightning Fall) Eaton's writing challenge--a spooky little drabble (a story of exactly 100 words). You can go to his site for links to all the other stories. Check them out here. My story is below.
COLD COMFORT
It was
snowing when Ella reached the cemetery. She didn’t really mind the wet smack of
snowflakes on her bare skin; icy kisses that melted into her hair and trickled
down her neck. Although the cemetery would not close for another hour, Ella was
alone as she made her way to a grave heaped with blood-red roses that had faded
and freeze-dried in the frigid air.
She looked down, trying to imagine her
husband sleeping beneath her feet. She supposed he was with Jesus now but she
wouldn’t know. Neither murderers nor suicides go to heaven and she was both.
Oh my. Love that twist at the end. Nice!
ReplyDeleteNice one, Katherine.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. I didn't see the twist coming at all :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much everyone!
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